Date: May 21, 2021 06:24 am Title: A Beginning and An End
These are all really strong, but I especially love this line of JIm's: "She's exactly what he needs right now.¬†Maybe someday she'll also be what he wants." There are 10,000 word fics that don't capture Jim's feelings for Karen that well.
Date: February 24, 2017 07:39 am Title: A Beginning and An End
I am so impressed with what you managed to do with so few words! Amazing story -- I especially loved Karen's perspective! It was nice to have her insight
Author's Response: you wrote this forever ago but thanks so much for the comment! I've been liking my wordy multi-chapters lately but it's fun to take on something different and poses a challenge like a short world limit. And I'm a JAMmer 4 lyfe but I do enjoy writing from Karen's POV.
Date: February 07, 2017 04:31 pm Title: A Beginning and An End
Cool to see a story play out completely in so few words. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for posting this challenge! Sorry I didn't see it sooner (we sadly can't list the challenges by date so they can get lost in the shuffle...)
Date: February 03, 2017 08:20 am Title: The End and The Beginning
Clever! I have no idea how people can convey a story, feelings and character interpretation in so little words... It was really good!
Author's Response: you left this review a while ago but thank you! it was a fun little challenge!