Date: April 21, 2017 07:39 pm Title: Scenario #2 (Pam’s POV): Coffee…or something
Nice to see more from you!
Im team!pam all the way and seeing her so heartbroken through S3 is very difficult for me. I like a little angst but the writers sure gave her a hard time, and it seems to go on forever!
Scenario one was painful for me and I was left feeling very confused about Jim. Was this supposed to be an alt route to canon? With the same ending as S3?
Scenario two was fun for me, I loved getting to read both POVs. Pam was very pam in this. Ready to back off and give up knowing he had found someone else and just bottling things up. But just enough pressure and she explodes. I like it this way... much quicker than the show. Plus I really enjoy reading a good confrontation between them.
It's very clear, to me anyway, that Jim didn't consider what he did to Pam with his CN confession and sudden transfer and then coming back with Karen. He was too wrapped up in himself... it's nice to see Pam bold enough to let him know. I really appreciate that.
Date: April 18, 2017 01:35 am Title: Scenario #2 (Pam’s POV): Coffee…or something
Okay right off the bat the "(a Sandra Bullock-o-thon?)" bit made me laugh!
I think you really nailed Pam's inner monologue in this chapter, especially at the start when she's pacing around in her apartment analysing the days events. It was totally believe and really sounded like what I'd imagine her thought process would be like when I watch the show. I think it's important to emphasise how even if Pam had feelings on casino night, she was denying them or honestly didn't realise what they were; I think this fic does a good job of establishing that AND the process of realisation that she went through in season 3.
Looking forward for more! :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2017 09:28 am Title: Scenario #2 (Pam’s POV): Coffee…or something
Bravo! Great characterization and a lovely way to skip over the agony of the Karen fiasco. Welcome to MTT!