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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2017 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1

You've done a really great job showing Pam's realization throughout the day that Roy isn't the guy for her.

Reviewer: Pyrofanity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2017 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story.

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start! I love how the conversation on the roof fits the characters, I can see Pam coming to the realization that she's not in love with Roy anymore and yet the next breath get worried that she can't actually go through with breaking up with him, and at this point Jim knowing saying she should be with him would only spook her so he simply offers his friendship. Excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Rach3l Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2017 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love your take on this! Please keep posting :)

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2017 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG please continue this I can't wait for more! I really think you have the opportunity here to really delve into Pam's hidden emotions at the end of season 2 in a way that could definitely be cannon! :)

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