Date: May 02, 2020 07:16 pm Title: Casino Night
WHAT THE HECK, AG. I'm in tears. My heart physically HURTS. I'm on the verge of hating you. If Pam doesn't go RUNNING after him in the next chapter I'm gonna burst. (But this story is FANTASTIC, reading it is literally the only thing I've done all day.) I shall update you on my feelings shortly.
Date: June 03, 2018 04:52 pm Title: Epilogue: Awake
So I have to admit, I just got done with my second read through of this fic because it's just that good. I love the way you put so much detail into this relationship. How real you made the characters. I'm usually one to prefer canon-correct stories rather than most AU's. Not so with this one. Thanks for a great read.
Date: May 28, 2018 12:44 pm Title: Epilogue: Awake
Whew! Now that I've gone back and reread this a second time, I think I've finally soaked in all of the awesomeness. Because there was a lot of awesome in this story.
My favorite part of the last chapter was Pam's declaration of wanting to wearing Jim's name. My favorite part of this chapter was the progression of what that actually meant through the years and how it just got better with time.
This chapter wrapped up the entire story so perfectly, but it's also a lovely standalone. You know, like "Second Story!" and well, it made me feel all of the feelings and you're just a really great writer. :)
Date: May 20, 2018 07:47 pm Title: Changed for the Better
So lovely. I just adore stories that send them on their paths a little bit differently from the way the show did, and you’ve done it so beautifully. It’s so different from how they ended up but it’s so believable and true to their characters and to be honest, I kind of prefer it. I love the idea of them supporting each other in their dreams simultaneously and neither one of them wasting their potential at DM. I am sad to see this go but know that you have lots of other wonderful things up your sleeves for us!
Date: May 20, 2018 04:08 pm Title: Changed for the Better
Oh, this was lovely! I think my favorite part of this chapter was around the middle, beginning when Pam misunderstood his "I can't do this" and continuing through to the end of that scene. The dialogue was spot on and in character and that line about wanting to wear his last name on her shirt? Good stuff!
Date: May 08, 2018 06:08 am Title: Scranton Weekend: Sunday
I love getting to meet Jim’s whole family and seeing how they immediately take to Pam—it’s exactly how I picture things would have happened in the show. I love the angst and the buildup so much but I also love the payoff! This will be a hard one to see end but you have definitely done it justice.
Date: April 29, 2018 08:57 am Title: Scranton Weekend: Saturday
Yesssss I have been waiting to read this! So good. I’m glad I could help. 😉 All the buildup to this moment has been so spectacular and the payoff was FABULOUS. I know this story is coming to a close and that makes me so sad, but it was definitely joined the ranks as a favorite and one that I’ll read over and over again!
Date: April 16, 2018 07:52 pm Title: Scranton Weekend: Friday
Ha! Nope, not interested in the other character voices one bit. These last two chapters were wonderful.
Your transition from the angst to fluff with this story is just wonderful. (Kinda rare in this archive)
Date: April 16, 2018 03:41 pm Title: It's Been Five Days Since You've Looked At Me
Aww! This chapter is so sweet. I love imagining what their relationship would have been like had they gotten together while he was still in Stamford. You wrote it perfectly, of course!
Date: April 02, 2018 01:36 pm Title: Stamford Weekend: Part 3
Excellent as always! I agree with you that they would at the very least have a heated discussion but I mean—how could you *not* fight a little after everything that they’ve put each other through? And especially so in your story. Can’t wait to see what things will be like now that they’ve cleared the air a little!