Date: May 09, 2020 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 19
I kind of hate Roy for showing her that video and not letting Jim tell her their story but at the same time I feel like she needed this in order to actually get it. Nonetheless, my heart is broken and beyond repair.
1 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2019 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
So, I love this chapter in its entirety but I have to point one thing that really stands out as exceptional. Everything prior to Roy showing up at Pam's parent's house is supposed to have this quiet, calm, stoic cadence and I FEEL that in your writing. I don't know if it's the word choice or the intimacy of Jim putting on Pam's makeup or the calmness of the office but, whatever it is, I really got that sense of calm just reading it. Very impressive!
Now...about Roy and that video. I don't know if I'm mad at Roy or thankful or annoyed but that was really good stuff. That ending "I didn't see you" got me. Hard.
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2019 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Daaaaaaaaaang that's all I can say. Great work
Date: January 31, 2019 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow! Of all the things I thought might happen, having Roy do that was no where near being on my radar. It's such a change from the Roy usually seen in fic. I like the change. Roy has let her go and now just wants her to be happy. It's really a great thing to see.
The walk around the office was great.I really liked that Michael had one of his rare moments where he's actually a good man rather than the man-child he usually is.
Pam reaching out so desperately for Jim like this though? Brilliant. Not sure what else to say other than that.
Date: January 31, 2019 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG ROY! You're like... You know, it all makes sense in such a beautiful way. How Roy is simply direct and blunt and sometimes a beast because of that. And how Jim would do the noble thing and be slow and just tiptoe around things waiting... But right now, I think Pam really needed that pull, and Jim wouldn't have given it to her. So, thanks Roy.
I love how much in character you've kept them all in this. Best chapter ever.
Date: January 31, 2019 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 19
You make me cry a lot with this story in general, because you're really good at evoking emotions. But this one in particular. I feel blessed that you got us to this point with 3 updates in a day too. Thanks so much.
Specifically, I like Roy actually being helpful, I like Pam being triggered by all sorts of things, and I'm a big fan of everyone in the office being actually respectful for once. Well done. Out of jellybeans for this a long time ago, but I'd give you all 5 for this chapter alone.