Date: January 16, 2019 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a very nice take on that first date. I liked the fact that they go back to the office to redo Casino Night.
(You misspelled Meredith at the beginning, btw).
The dialogues flow nicely, too. Both of them in character.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the typo. Only fair since I've done the same for you. I wanted to do something different with this one. Re-creating where it all went wrong and making it where it all went right was a fun challenge. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: June 03, 2018 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, is there anything I can do to make sure you continue this one? 😂
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Like I said, I have a few ideas for a longer story and this could very well end up being a chapter in said story. Thanks for the review.
Date: June 02, 2018 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet! I will never get tired of reading different versions of their first date and this was so good. I like that Pam didn’t want to erase the last year, especially since she learned so much from it. Looking forward to your next story!
Author's Response: Thank you. I had fun exploring that part of Pam's thinking. After everything that happened in S3 I just couldn't see Pam simply going back to "the way things were." I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review.
Date: June 01, 2018 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, so very sweet. Honestly, I thought I'd read every version of the First Date there could be, but this surprised me! The recreation of Casino Night was a lovely visual, and oh-so-satisfying to end that night on a happy note! They have an easy back-and-forth and make the transition to romance about as seamlessly as possible. Thank you for this new and different scenario that is a fun road to travel! Great first fic! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I just recently got into watching "The Office." Thank you Netflix. Jim and Pam quickly became my favorite characters. After reading a bunch of other fics here and on fanfiction.net the ideas for this came up. I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write.