Reviews For Five Steps Back
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Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2006 09:34 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans

So sweet and good.  I loved the part with Kevin.  Now get back to DL!  :)

Author's Response: Thanks - and trust me, I'm working on DL!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 05:52 pm Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans

Aww, silly Pam. What an adorable, tentative first step for her.

Reviewer: Muppet Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 12:53 pm Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans

"'Back', as in, 'not gone anymore.'

Hee. That line cracked me up.  Picturing it (hearing it?) in Kevin made me laugh even more:)

You are a fic writing Machine!  Loved the beginning, off to read more... 

 

 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 06:41 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans

What a delightful way to begin my morning....holidays, Jim eating jellybeans, Pam FINALLY showing some initiative, Jim's mom (mom liking girlfriend = good thing, or so I tell my son.)  And btw, very flattered by your response to the haiku review I left yesterday - thanks for that!

Author's Response: Yes, I truly believe the clincher is that Jim's mom would love Pam - even though she's put her son through hell.  I think as a mom Larissa could see the ultimate good Pam does her son.  

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 05:54 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans

No candy when  Jim wasn't there. Aww

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