Date: July 17, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Very nice!
10 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2006 10:51 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
this story was fantastic! you write Jim and Pam so well! Thank you so much for sharing!
9 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2006 03:05 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Oh, yay! I can't tell you how happy each of these chapters made me. Pam making additional little efforts to reach out, bonding with his mom, the sweetness of the evening with the Christmas tree, and ohhh, that last one :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 03:28 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
These were lovely. And the last line was awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 02:37 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This was awesome! You're such a good writer. (can't wait for more distance learning! come on!!) I've been thinking it would be cool for someone to write a more realistic version of how Jim and Pam might interact following the upcoming merger and this seemed pretty real. I would love to see this kind of thing happen...great job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 02:05 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
what a cute funny ending, i loved it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 01:07 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Oh, the sweetness! I loved this, and think it is a very realistic version of how things could play out. I just don't see Jim and Pam being able to avoid falling into their old dynamic.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 12:23 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This was really sweet. The ending got me a little teary.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 09:55 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This is so sweet and adorable, and very true to the show. I can see something just like this happening--tiny baby steps leading up to the big moment.
Date: October 27, 2006 07:06 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Nobody needs Ryan Seacrest to tell them anything! There are so many things to love about this but I have to go with Christmas because I'm a sucker for live trees. I love when she said the tree reminded her of Jim, tall but not too full, and her rubbing cream on his forearms - you are shameless! Another great job.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:32 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Aww. Cute ending. Add Mary McDonnell as Jim's mom, and we're set. :-)
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:31 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
that was so cute. and the jelly bellies? perfect detail!
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:05 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Very nice, especially this last chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:44 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
So much to love about this story. Jellybeans, Larissa Halpert and Pam making all the moves. EXCELLENT. And New Year's Eve declarations of love without having them drunk off their asses? Also excellent. What a lovely morning treat!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:43 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
hahaha, that last sentance was great! wonderful story to wake up to :)
Date: October 27, 2006 04:18 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
things I loved in this: the tree reference, forearms, Fancy New Beesly -- I think I can forgive you for writing something besides the new chapter of DL!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 03:37 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Awww, yay! All these little vignettes were so lovely. At first, I wasn't sure if they were connected or just 5 alternative scenarios of steps towards each other. I love the idea that Pam has started putting out jelly beans for Jim again, and that she and Jim's mom get to bond.
I am a total sucker for holiday fic so it couldn't have ended better. I am so impressed. This really rocked!