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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2021 10:35 pm Title: Radio Silence

Rereading this for Advent and was reminded STRONGLY of this: https://xkcd.com/959/

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2019 04:45 pm Title: Radio Silence

First things first: Thank you for getting Good King Wenceslas stuck in my head. That'll be later at 2am ;)

I love this a lot already... Dunder-Mifflin seems like the perfect setting for a Hallmark Christmas movie type story (some of my favorites, by the way) and I'm already sucked into this one.

Some highlights: Ugh, Roy. I say it every time, but you know I'm going to say it again - He's the worst. Of course he took the vacation with Kenny. And of course Michael took away their week off. This is such a great set up, I can't wait to see what happens next! But mostly, I'm just giggling at Creed wishing Pam a Happy Canada Day while wearing a reindeer sweater. Perfect.

Author's Response:

I hope the 2am demons of Good King Wenceslas did not strike you. I spent a summer (odd time for the song I admit) singing that song back and forth with my fellow camp counselors to the eternal frustration of our charges...good times.

 Thank you for the feedback! This whole thing was a blast to write, but the opening in particular because I got to think about what Hallmark-style terrible-boyfriend actions Roy could have taken within the Office universe. 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2018 08:46 pm Title: Radio Silence

Intriguing beginning! I like your voice for Pam’s inner monologue. What a fun beginning... Roy was really a goober, wasn’t he?

Author's Response: Thanks! This is what set me down the Hallmark rabbit hole--I'd been watching Hallmark movies and I realized that Roy was exactly the kind of goober the woman always starts with in them.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 04:48 pm Title: Radio Silence

Very good introspective chapter here. I liked seeing Pam's thought's leading up to Christmas. Roy is a fool as usual. I also like the quick reference to the teapot.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is how I usually see Roy: an idiot, but not actively malicious. Just dumb.

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