1 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2020 08:54 am Title: Your Card, Madam
A lovely way to end a very cute story. This is just a feverishly buffoonish Roy, and seeing Pam wake up and realize she wants more from her life (and from her best friend) was great fun. This isn’t really my genre, but from the Hallmark movies I have experienced (because honestly, whether you like them or not you’re going to end up absorbing them) it feels like you hit the beats of it really well.
You also did a good job building some funny lines in here – Michael’s sweater and the runner about a tree’s adventures at a company that sells a wood product are hilarious, and the description of Katy (and Kelly) as very kind tornadoes blowing through your life is SPOT ON.
Author's Response: Yeah, for this kind of fic Roy really has to be a buffoon...but I don't think it's unwarranted ;). I really appreciate the way you manage to catch fun lines I buried into the fics every time. You have a good eye for the same lines I like writing :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2019 06:59 pm Title: Your Card, Madam
The best part? Roy forgetting they'd broken up. I actually loled at that. Great story! (Very Hallmark-y)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Roy fits the bill as a dumb Hallmark starter boyfriend almost too well!
Date: January 06, 2019 06:37 pm Title: Your Card, Madam
I can picture Jim pulling out a giant ball of tinsel and just casually handing it to Pam perfectly. I love that.
Oh. My. God. You nailed everything about this. Seriously, it's so great!
Can that officially be what The Letter said? It's perfect.
Also, it's a small thing but I really enjoyed how Jim just hands her the letter and then goes about with the prank and it's all very casual but it's Not. Not even a little bit. I'm glad he didn't fall off that ladder.
This was such a lovely, definitely Hallmark-inspired, Christmas story! You did good, Comfect. You did real good.
Author's Response: I really, really enjoyed writing this chapter (and this fic) and I'm so glad that it struck the same chord with you. Thanks so much for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2018 09:37 pm Title: Your Card, Madam
Sigh. It would have been nice if it had been this easy. The card is lovely.
Thank you for writing this beautiful thing.
Author's Response: Wouldn't it though? Although I guess they wanted us all to keep watching so it couldn't be so neat. And thank you; it's a pleasure to write for attentive readers.
1 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2018 05:38 pm Title: Your Card, Madam
D'awwww. What a very cute way to wrap this up. Fun references back to the show, a prank on Dwight, the teapot note, and of course Jim and Pam together. Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the consistent feedback! I loved writing this, and I hope whomever sent in this fic recipe enjoys or enjoyed it too (should be pretty easy to identify given some of the elements I was asked to include).