Date: March 15, 2019 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this story and then I read your other story which I also enjoyed. You are great a capturing the emotions of the characters and your writing is clear and concise and I look forward to reading more of your work!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed them both, and my style of writing. Hopefully there will be more... I really appreciate you taking the time to review.
Date: March 13, 2019 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this. It's a nice mixture of all the various moments that make it happen, just sped up--and it makes perfect sense to speed it up, because why couldn't she have mentioned it to Roy sooner? It would be almost kind.
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I think it would have been kinder. I feel like Roy only persisted for so long in Season 3 because he didn’t understand Pam’s true motivations for calling off the wedding... But, it certainly added to the angst so I see why the writers went that way.
Date: March 13, 2019 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1
There are a lot of reasons I love this story. I could honestly just copy and paste all of the words here and say they’re my favorite parts. The language used and the phrases strung together - ugh, you’ve just painted the most gorgeous picture with all of it. But I especially loved the part about Pam and her new apartment both being a little worse for the wear but still with plenty of potential.
And the bit where it all feels so high school to her but Jim doesn’t even go here anymore? I really loved that. Also loved Kevin and Oscar jumping to her defense at the bar.
But hey. Jenna. This entire butterfly thing? I just... I love it so very much.
I felt everything Pam was feeling right along with her and your words again, they just evoke the best images here.
Author's Response: This review is so very lovely. Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
Date: March 13, 2019 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
A very cute story here. Rather than go through all the heartache of Season 3 we just fast forward right to the good parts. I liked it. I'm kind of a sucker for Pam-finds-her-courage-early stories and even though this one is quick, it's very nice. The kiss on the end was just the right way to finish this one off. Great job for your first fic here.
Thank you! I too am a sucker for any Pam-finding-courage stories. For all the angst of Season 3, I just love her growth. I feel like she’s such a better/stronger version of herself from it all.