1 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2019 09:40 am Title: Chapter 2
I love a more bold and honest Pam! But she must be feeling so sad and confused right now... after sending out such and honest letter and being so vulnerable only to get no response from him, and then to find out he’s not with Karen on top of it. And Jim learning so late that she isn’t married is a interesting twist. Love Karen in the friend/wing person role too, it’s a much better use of her.
Don’t worry too much about inconsistencies with the show, fanfic doesn’t have to be consistent with canon as long as continuity throughout the story itself holds true.
Date: March 16, 2019 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Again PLEASE make this a bigger font size. It's very hard to read. I won't repeat what I wrote in my last review about not rushing to post, but it still applies.
Good on Jim to break things off with Karen early like this. Sets things up nicely for his return. Also good to see Jim and Pam together again. Looking forward to seeing how the catch up with each other.