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Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2019 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well yes. Yes, we do need a new chapter. This was short and sweet, and I think this story has lots of potential. How did Pam end up with Jim? Is it just a very vivid dream? And what happens when she returns the ring? Will Roy react violently?
So many possibilities. Hope you do write another chapter

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2019 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Short but it's got good bones. I think Pam going from giggling and laughing to crying and back again so quickly was a little out of character. Anxious or worried that she'd made a mistake, but I'm not sure she'd get to full on crying so quickly. I get what you're doing though.

I will admit I'm curious to see how this pans out.

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