1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2019 08:06 am Title: Chapter 16: Penny's
Oh, that's intriguing. The start of JAM dynamic is sooo good. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long, but hopefully we'll be back on the update track now. Thanks for the review! Glad you found it intriguing.
Date: November 06, 2019 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 16: Penny's
Ah, the wisdom of sisters... I’m glad Penny felt she could say as much as she said & that Pam wasn’t too on the defensive & could hear it. Hopefully it will spark some more critical reflection from Pam...
Author's Response: I hope so too! Thanks for the review.
Date: November 05, 2019 03:51 am Title: Chapter 16: Penny's
Short and sweet but powerful. Seems like Pam's heart is a couple steps ahead of her mind here. I liked that she looks up and it seems that only then she notices that she's basically packed everything up in order to move out.
What I'm curious about is Penny saying leaving Roy "this time." This implies there have been other times Pam's shown up like this, Penny has expressed her disapproval of Roy, but Pam's gone back to him. Interesting tidbit there.
Also welcome to the baby-kicks-while-on-the-computer club.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think this is going to accelerate a little, but you're still right that Pam's not entirely caught up with her own heart yet. And yes, good catch on the tidbit--that's fleshed out a little (not a lot) in the next chapter.