1 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2019 02:16 am Title: Chapter 25: The Batmobile
Oh, that's a wonderful chapter! I love so much to see them just being themselves, silly and simple, without obstacles. Want to see how it'll end!
And the line 'but they were laughing, and she was happy, and all was right in the world,' - is the best.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think we all know how it's going to end, but the point is the details, isn't it? :)
Date: December 17, 2019 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 25: The Batmobile
I wish I could leave more than 5 jellybeans. Love this story. Wouldn’t mind if you kept it nice and long. I am definitely going back to read the whole thing once it’s complete.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to try to get this done by the New Year, FYI :)
Date: December 17, 2019 11:47 am Title: Chapter 25: The Batmobile
Another sweet chapter. Things are definitely looking like they’re headed in the right direction! I’m with Pam in the tea verses sugary concoction debate... Very cute banter there.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always worry about the banter, so thanks for the reassurance!
Date: December 17, 2019 10:46 am Title: Chapter 25: The Batmobile
Wonderful banter back and forth between them. When I read Pam's choice of tea I thought she might use the line, "tea, Earl Grey, hot," that Captain Picard so famously uses in "Star Trek: The Next Generation." If it's just a matter or word order error there and this IS a Picard reference, it's delightful. Let's face it, it's delightful either way considering how you've got them bouncing off each other like this.
Wonderful as always to see an update for this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I should have quoted that more accurately, but I think I'll let the misquote stand. It was a lot of fun to create this banter, and I'm glad it worked for you!