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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2020 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

He's halfway to seducing ME, for crying out loud.

Author's Response: I mean what else are weekends for when you're a new couple, amiright?

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2019 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

As I said in ch. 1, you always do such a good job with the incidental details. This chapter has that in spades. You should be proud of your scene-setting.

Author's Response: One of my favorite authors once said about writing, "paint a picture with words." Glad that approach is working here.

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