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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2020 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ah, the infamous thing made of ice. I'm glad it did someone some good, because it sure didn't do much good for Dwight. Or Angela. Or Andy.

Author's Response: I was starting to scrape the bottom of the barrel a bit till I figured that one out. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2019 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm so glad you've leaned into the slice of life instead of overemphasizing the cards. It's a lovely technique.

Author's Response: Thank you for that. The cards and holiday season are fun to be sure. But life still goes on regardless of season. 

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2019 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

These have been such fun to read - a treat to have one each day, too!
Todd Packer IS such a Monday.... I think the dialog between Jim and Pamin Chapter 6 was spot on. Ch 6 had such a nice energy followed by a calmer ch 7. I'm looking forward to going back and reading this as a whole when you finish. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm very glad you've been enjoying this story so much and that the Jim and Pam banter and other story choices have been working. It's been a lot of fun to write this as well. Hope you enjoy the rest of it as well. Thanks for the review.

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