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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2020 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued

I thought for a second there that they were going to get a little mad with each other and miscommunicate, but you grounded them back to a sense of calm so seamlessly. It was great to see Pam recognize that and switch from flirty to honest in a moment.
This chapter was so, so lovely. You explained the way they make each other better versions of themselves perfectly. I loved it, that’s it exactly.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think they have space for being annoyed at each other without it ruining this--which is an important stage for any couple. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2020 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued

'We’re a couple.'
Finally! Finally! I'm going to celebrate that! Thank you :)
*dancing a little kitchen jig.*

Author's Response: You're welcome! I hope you had a nice dance :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2020 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued

If I'm reading this right, I think this is review number 100 for this delightful story. Yay! It's the small things that bring me joy.

Love their conversation. It's as if they were both given the clairvoyance to see what we saw in S3. The canon Jim and Pam who just were not quite themselves since they were so lost. Now though in this AU they've both realized they've spared each other all that angst. Good on Pam for stopping the whole answer a question with a question thing there. While it's well within keeping for their usual banter, it's also great to see more honest and direct communication. Just lovely.

Author's Response: You were correct, my friend. It brings me joy too. And thanks; I'm trying to thread a needle where they aren't as damaged as they are by "Gay Witch Hunt" and so they can see things more clearly, but they also don't have all that extra baggage. Your comment makes it sound like I'm succeeding. 

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued

Adorable. I loved it. I love the way they got together in the show, but man, it would have been GREAT if this had actually happened. Great job!!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. That's extremely high praise! I hope to keep living up to it.

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