Date: April 06, 2020 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 29: The Night into Morning
I like that despite Pam and Jim are together now and have four (disputable, but let it be four) dates, they are still nervous and don't quite believe that this is all for real.
It's adorable and touching... well, I love everything about Jam, but this fragile stage of their relationships takes a special place in my heart.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's a lot of fun to write--most of my stories hit that fragile time at least once. This one of course is deep in it.
Date: April 05, 2020 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 29: The Night into Morning
Is knackered part of the American vernacular? I did a bit of a double take because it sounded so very Australian - a good thing in this story!
I like contrast here, in Jim having a very random selection of clothing, & Pam having everything. Although, I’m with Pam there, sometimes it harder to pick something when you have all the options (& somehow no options all at once... story of my life...)
That last little bit. Ugh. I can see it all so clearly. Jim’s disappointment & then the way he would light up at seeing Pam. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Not really, no. I just like the word so I used it! Glad you're enjoying :)
Date: April 05, 2020 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 29: The Night into Morning
Back to introspection. Nothing wrong with that mind you. Considering the subject matter of the chapter, it's rather fitting. Love the comparisons of them choosing their wardrobes. Jim's pink shirt, green henley, and a bomber T-shirt. (Gives Comfect a quick Jim face and resolves to keep working on his own stuff as soon as this review is written)
Pam's dream was fun to envision. Written subtle enough to keep the rating, but considering the talent for writing more detailed fics about such things on the forum, still plenty there to one to envision. Nice balance. Also kinda of fun to envision Pam, Penny, and Kelly heading out for a girls night with Penny and Kelly trying to do their best to get Pam out of her normal attire.
The last lovely image was right at the end of course. Where Jim sees her coming out of her room. Something tells me he'll be looking like that at her for some time. Which is of course adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will always take introspection breaks, especially if I can make Jim look ridiculous ;). Bombers and Jim just go together you know (I'm behind on reviewing, sorry).