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Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 51: As Close As This Story Comes to Uprating

I for one will be the first to admit that I'm just here for the fluff! I appreciate not uprating.

I like how the plan is all coming together, it will be nice to see it all tied up!

Author's Response: I am glad, since I don't like uprating. And thank you!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 08:26 am Title: Chapter 51: As Close As This Story Comes to Uprating

My inner giggly teenager returned!
And I amaze how perfectly you pictured the mood without, well, uprating. Lovely!
I'd like to see Jan's response, but, to be honest, I'm more interested in... other conversations ;)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :)

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 03:50 am Title: Chapter 51: As Close As This Story Comes to Uprating

The chapter title was both funny and totally a spoiler, but I’ll forgive you given how good the content was! It makes all the sense in the world that Pam would be the best person to phrase the idea to Jan. I love that they’re both playing a part in making this plan come together. It showcases what a lovely team they are.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it and forgave the spoiler ;)

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2020 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 51: As Close As This Story Comes to Uprating

Aw man! No details? Fine.... leave us in suspense...

Jellybean!

Author's Response: Not from me, I'm afraid. Feel free to imagine for yourself. And thanks!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2020 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 51: As Close As This Story Comes to Uprating

First and foremost, I laughed enough to have my partner look at me strange from his seat in my ambulance cab when I read the title of this chapter. Well done in that regard.

Second, no over Office reference with the Latin mission name from last chapter. Just trying to go for something kinda fun. So there's that.

Good on you Jim for making sure to be the kind of boyfriend Pam deserves.

But then of course there's Pam. I love that she's not only embracing Fancy New Beesly for herself, but also remembering that it was Regular Old Pam that Jim fell in love with. And that he loves both of them. Great way to see her growth.

Have fun you two. You deserve it.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I did like the Latin name for the potential operation (though having in my life taken not one but two accelerated Latin courses to get language requirements out of the way, it did not require googling on those terms).

I hope you enjoy our fluff break before we get back to our regularly scheduled fluff-with-plot. 

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