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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 07:59 am Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Awww, it was sweet as ever! And the amazing fix of Booze Cruise disaster :)
I especially like the idea that the next kisses are better than the previous ones.
Thrilled to see koalas (and even more thrilled to see Pam's reaction on koalas and Jim's reaction on Pam's reaction on koalas; or would it be Jim who would show more interest?..)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the koala chapter lives up to your expectations.

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 05:51 am Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Awwww that ending😍

Author's Response: Thanks :-D

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 04:23 am Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Honestly, I don’t even like Sydney that much - it’s probably my least favorite Australian city & here you are making me long for a visit (& harbor views...)
Redoing booze cruise was a lovely touch. So sweet to have Pam’s “I’m cold” end in a far better way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I can make a city you don't love feel fresh to you. And I'm intrigued which cities you like better; everyone I know who's been there has raved about Melbourne, but I'm open to other suggestions of better Australian cities as well.

Reviewer: IgnorantSlut Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 02:00 am Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Absolutely loving this fic, but didn’t they do the booze cruise in January ? Sorry if it was in fact feb. still loving it

Author's Response: You are right! That's what happens when I don't fact check. I've updated it. Thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Some well needed closure on one chapter and a new adventure for a different chapter in their lives. Lots of fun envisioning them in this scene.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your support.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Looking forward to the Bearslys ;)

Short, to the point, fluffy, and excellent as usual.

Author's Response: I mean, they're always short ;). Thank you!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

So nice and fluffy! Love it

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Author's Response: Thank you

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