Date: May 16, 2020 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 69: Nice (Also, Diwali)
You made it to 69 chapters! Kevin would be proud!
Love that they are getting a re-do in the periwinkle dress and sweater. Sweet.
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing ;) And thanks for the review!
Date: May 16, 2020 08:31 am Title: Chapter 69: Nice (Also, Diwali)
Yay! They decided to fix the periwinkle dress issue! And it's really,really nice :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: May 16, 2020 01:43 am Title: Chapter 69: Nice (Also, Diwali)
First of all, I love the graphic for this story in the description. Good job there.
I really like that Jim is there to reign in Michael a little and try to keep the meeting on track. He and Pam are also looking out for Kelly's feelings again and it's lovely to see.
Does the office know they're dating yet? The only reason I ask is because if not, I can easily see Roy showing up to the Diwali party, seeing Jim and Pam in the fancy duds and slinking away even more than we see in canon.
Speaking of fancy duds, another way to fix Casino Night. I really like it when they pull out those outfits and get it right. There's a few stories out there like that and they're always a lot of fun. This is no different. Great job as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! I worked hard to crop and type on that picture...but more importantly to find it. And you will find out how out they are in the coming chapter, in fact. Thanks for the insight and the review!