Date: May 22, 2020 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
Beesly’s dorky dance moves!
I loved this chapter, such a refreshing take on a usually sad episode, I like what you’ve done with it. ‘Maybe the R stands for Refrigeration’ made me giggle, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun with it, and I'm glad it came across well.
Date: May 22, 2020 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
'Mark nodded, he nodded, and the two of them turned back to their respective dates.'
I don't know why, but this line made me giggle.
I'm glad that Pam wasn't upset too much about the 'stolen wedding' (I still can't forgive Phyllis for using Pam's ideas...) And I'm more than thrilled that vague ideas about another engagement already appeared in Pam's mind!
Amazing fix as usual!
Author's Response: Heh. Thanks! I think Phyllis is exactly the kind of person who says "all the work is already done? Sign me up." But that was not as nice in an angstier world--like the real S3. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 22, 2020 08:25 am Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
I think i never review this story before but i really like it. Everyday i am waiting for the new chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're along for the ride. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 22, 2020 03:27 am Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
“The R could stand for refrigerator,” Oh, I laughed. It really could knowing Bob Vance of Vance Refrigeration...
I really liked the touch of Daryl looking out for Roy (& everyone else by keeping Roy somewhat contained). That was lovely.
Ah, it’s a breath of fresh air to have the dorky dancer scene not be layered in angst.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're still enjoying this.
Date: May 21, 2020 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
Ahhhhhhhh.
Much nicer way for that wedding to play out. A double Pam POV chapter too. Is that the first time such a thing has happened in this fic? I could be. Her thoughts wondering if he was going to propose seemed very real. I also liked the insight on how the living together is going. No perfect, but perfect for them. Great way to describe it.
Author's Response: Technically the first part was Jim's POV--he was just entirely focused on Pam. I'm glad you're still enjoying, and thanks!
Date: May 21, 2020 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding
Is it bad that I wished for a really of the original Roy scene but with addes sass from Pam? Anyway, I'm okay with the yadda yadda there too, I just can't help wanting the Pam sass.
Going straight for my SciFi nerd heart with the Han Solo-ing, I will admit.
Also Pam not having all the answers to her feelings, felt pretty on point. I'd be almost disappointed if she didn't have some thoughts on being engaged again so soon.
Yet another enjoyable fixit, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I could have added that, but I didn't have specific sass in mind, so I just yaddaed it....