Date: May 27, 2020 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 80: The Job, Part 1
Well, I just keep my fingers crossed for Jim and for Pam. And I'm sure, one way or another, but they'll happy.
But it would be a tad better if they ended up in the same city :)
Author's Response: I think I can promise a happy ending. Because I'm not a total dick... Thank you!
Date: May 27, 2020 02:34 am Title: Chapter 80: The Job, Part 1
I love that you still had Beach Games a precipice of courage for Pam. Despite how AU you’ve gone, those little moments that link it all to canon make this really special.
Supportive Pam and Jim are so very lovely. The way they have complete confidence in other (even wrapped in their own insecurities) is great. I have my fingers crossed for the both of them...
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Beach Games is critical for Pam's development and I tried to make that happen here...
Date: May 26, 2020 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 80: The Job, Part 1
Feels like a good setup for the finale. You've got Jim and Pam both in great places in their lives. Nice use of some canon lines there in the introspection. Dwight was a treat being in character like that, as was how Jim shut him down.
Loved the pieces that Pam sent into Pratt. From where I'm sitting, a great way to highlight her range.
Looking forward to seeing how this all wraps up.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the finale feels right--I was very happy with it, but then again, I wrote the dang thing...
Date: May 26, 2020 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 80: The Job, Part 1
I can't believe this story is coming to an end! I also can't believe how much you've updated and kept it going during this time! It's become my bedtime reading. I've loved watching this blossom into the AU we all wish we could have watched, so thank you for making the happen. I know I haven't reviewed on every chapter, but awesome and amazing job for all the ones I haven't said something either. :) all the jelly beans to you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you've been enjoying this all the way through, and thanks so much for reading. Hope the finale lives up to your expectations!