1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2020 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m loving this so far! His name for her on his phone was hilarious. Can’t wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am so happy to hear that and I am glad you thought that. Thank you so much.
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2020 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh, this was great! What a wonderful set up. Lovely imagery of Jim in his Stamford apartment, my heart hurts with the misery of it all. I loved Pam starting to move into her new apartment quietly, before breaking it to Roy. That’s very sensible and well planned of her - which totally fits with Pam. She’s not a spur of the moment girl of girl. She thinks things through. I hope there’s more to come of this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I agree with you about Pam not being a spur of the moment type of person and I appreciate that you liked that part. I am writing more of this, hopefully a happier chapter than last time though. Thank you very much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2020 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, please, continue! This story is so good, in that achingly and angsty way that makes you desperate for more (and for the happiness in the end ;))
And the final line... gah, I'm almost crying at this. So... thank you!
Author's Response:
I am writing chapter two and I am thrilled to hear that you want me to continue. I'm so happy to hear that you want me to write more and that you liked the last line. Thank you so much! :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2020 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet! I hope you plan to continue, although it could definitely stand alone as is. But more, please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am writing chapter two at the moment but I am delighted that you think it could be a stand alone.
Date: April 01, 2020 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hope you are continuing this. Lovely.
Author's Response: I am writing the next chapter today and it should be out soon. Thank you and I am glad you think it is lovely.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2020 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
For a subject that's been done quite a bit on the archive, this was really good. I was wondering how you'd take it. It does all seem to fit with them. Jim just sitting there being numb with a glass of Scotch. Alone in his thoughts. Hard to see him like that.
The idea that Pam sneak moved out to her new apartment was brilliant. I'm not sure I've seen that idea before so that was good.
Then of course their tearful and emotional conversation here. Great to see them being honest. I can very easily see this happening. Kind of funny how Jim had her name in his phone. Nice touch.
Great start. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I do realise that it is often written about on the archive and I appreciate that you think it is good. I hope you'll like how I choose to carry on. I was rewatching season 3 and I couldn't get the image of Jim with a glass of scotch out of my mind. It was quite hard to write about him like that. I appreciate that you think that you that having Pam sneak out was a good idea - I don't really know how it happened, but once the idea was there I couldn't stop myself from including it. I felt that in this season Jim and Pam needed to be honest no matter how hard it was and I felt like Jim would do that to avoid calling Pam. Thank you so much for your lovely review and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2020 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww 🥰 so angsty and fun. What a great start to this story. Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so pleased that you think that and I am working on chapter two right now.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2020 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brought a smile to my face, I liked it.
The dialogue in the middle seemed a little off to me, the shift in mood there was a bit jarring.
Overall though, great job, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the chapter and that it made you smile, honestly it is some of the best praise I think anyone can hear. I apologise for the dialogue in the middle, it has been over six months since I have last written and I am hoping to improve on it over the few chapters, but I appreciate you giving me a goal to work towards. I'm delighted that you are looking forward to reading more. Thank you!