Date: May 22, 2020 06:24 am Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
I like this story. I hope you ´ll update it.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that you like it. Sorry for taking so long to update, I will work on the next chapter as soon as I can get a new laptop. Thank you.
1 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2020 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
Honestly I think I could read them on the phone nonstop. You write it so well! I loved the little scene with Jim and Karen. Take a hint, Fillipelli, damn! I am looking forward to future phone calls and an in person meeting! Great job!
Author's Response: I am so pleased to hear that! Thank you so much and I felt like I should include Jim's life outside of his phone calls with Pam. Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2020 04:17 am Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
Well, this is all kinds of lovely. It definitely changes the tone of Jim in Stamford to have Pam in his corner like this. I like that he’s aware of what’s going on with Karen, but is maintaining some boundaries. I’m with Jim - hopefully we’ll get to see them back in the same room!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it is so kind of you to say that. I feel like with Pam in his corner, Jim can do anything and I also feel like Jim would be able to keep his boundaries when it comes to Karen with Pam in his corner. Hopefully they will be able to meet again, but you'll have to wait and see.
1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2020 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
So sweet! Karen’s kinda creepy in this story 😅
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2020 11:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
Another great update. Clear signs that Jim's heart is healing. How could it not with daily calls from Pam along with all the text messages as well. After such a big shock I kinda like that. Injuries rarely heal quickly so this adds an element of reality to the story. However I love that Jim is determined now to get back to Pam in a face-to-face setting.
Interesting take on Karen. Nice balance as well. Clearly Karen' into Jim. He's just trying to be friendly. A few potshots from Karen there as well. Maybe this time since Jim's heart is on the mend, he'll be able to see some of those signs earlier and thus not doom them all into the season long rebound heartache we saw in canon.
Great writing.
Author's Response:
I am pleased that you like how Jim's heart is healing and yes, I think if we all had daily conversations with Pam then we'd all find our hearts healing. I think Pam would like a face to face meeting too.
Karen was difficult to write, but I found in season 3 it was very obvious that Karen was definitely into Jim from the beginning. Jim is always friendly I think and perhaps you'll be right about Jim reading the signs.
Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2020 03:02 am Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
This chapter breaks my heart and mends it again. And again. And again.
I hope that the day they find themselves in the same room comes as soon as possible!
Thank you :)
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that it had such an effect on you. I just hope that by the end of the story your heart will be in one piece. Maybe they will find themselves in the same room, but who knows? Thank you so much for a lovely comment. :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2020 02:36 am Title: Chapter 2 - Our Normal
Karen's kind of oblivious here isn't she. I mean, at least S3 Karen didn't have Jim reacting to Pam normally...
Nice story though. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: She is kind of, but I feel that season 3 Karen never really saw who Jim actually was in many ways. I am glad you're enjoying and thank you for your lovely comment.