Reviews For Pam 6.0
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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2020 01:19 am Title: The Last Mile

I think this is a very reasonable way for things to progress during the day. Apartments are hard to find! Good luck, Pam.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I always hope my writing comes off as plausible!

Thanks for reviewing, see you next time!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 11:10 pm Title: The Last Mile

Lovely job of intertwining some of those canon moments (i.e. Michael) into this. Pam is not in for an easy evening...

Author's Response:

Thanks, not much more of that to do seeing as in canon this was the last episode of the easson, so whatever happens next I'll have to improvise!

Appreciate you reviewing, see you next chapter!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 09:16 pm Title: The Last Mile

Yeah, she's going to need some steel in her spine. Fortunately for her she's got an anchor in Jim and it seems to be working out well. One thing I did notice here was that Roy didn't come up and tickle an apology out of Pam at Jim's desk like we saw in canon. I could see him trying something like that when she and Roy get back to the apartment which gives Pam the fire to get it through his head that she's done. Or if you have another way, I'm sure that'll work too.

Nice job getting into her head as well as characterizing the craziness that is the DM Scranton office.

Author's Response:

I do have some fire on tap for Pam, in the form of a plot hole that I created inadvertently that may come back to bite Roy in the butt.

My thinking is that Roy was hoping to leave Pam alone long enough for her to "realize what and overreaction" she was having, and as such avoided her for the rest of the day.

Thanks for taking the time to give feedback, I hope to see you next time!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 06:29 pm Title: The Last Mile

I really like this story. I wish the chapter was longer, but that’s just me being greedy. I really want to read what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Sorry I couldn't get a longer chapter out today, I got done what I could before a prior commitment.

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