1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 10:21 pm Title: Heartache and a thousand natural shocks
Ugh. This is so crushing. Michael not knowing what to do at the end kills me.
Author's Response: I try :) Hopefully the coming chapters are enjoyable!
Date: May 03, 2020 09:31 pm Title: Heartache and a thousand natural shocks
Holy crap! And I thought the last chapter was a gut punch. To have Pam there to experience it all over, especially with Jim there! Wow! That's...intense.
I have absolutely no idea where this one is going to go from here. Yeah, just wow.
Author's Response: First Jam story, so I'm not 100% sure either. Thanks for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 08:52 pm Title: The end before the beginning
Damn. This was good. Dark, but good. That last line though? Oh god. Is there more to come? That last line makes it feel - heartbreakingly - complete...
Author's Response: Definitely more to come! Thanks so much for reading :)
1 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 07:06 am Title: The end before the beginning
'Years later, when Pam looks back, she knows this was the moment that she gave up on Jim Halpert.'
That line hurts so much, and yet, it's a great starting! Can't wait to see what happens next.
And I keep my fingers crossed and hope for better.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really excited to be writing fanfic here. I'm hoping things get better too!
1 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 04:56 am Title: The end before the beginning
Oh, this is fantastic. The visuals and emotions pulled me right in. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm excited to follow this where it goes.
1 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 04:51 am Title: The end before the beginning
Woah. A lot of emotion in here. That last line is heart breaking. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.
1 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 04:30 am Title: The end before the beginning
Yo please don’t keep them apart in this, I know their both hurting but they really do need each other. Great first chapter and welcome to MTT. Can’t wait to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the very warm welcome! I really do hope they'll find their way back to each other, even if it's a long and winding path.
Date: May 02, 2020 01:20 am Title: The end before the beginning
Wow, so that's one helluva start. Throw the book at Roy Pam. Guys that behave like that deserve to rot in jail for the rest of their lives.
Pam giving up on Jim though is a hard line to read. I mean I get it in the context of this story. So, the question now is how will Jim react? Very interested to find out. Great way to hook in a reader that's for sure.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! First review ever here, so it means a lot. Jim's reaction will come soon :)