1 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2020 12:22 pm Title: Prelude
I'm excited to see the sequel!
And the thing I like the most - the way that their new relationship status basically didn't change their communication.
Oh, and 'How dare you' moment! That's sweet :) I wonder how you're going to blend season 2 and 4 in the next chapters!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you're looking forward to it! Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2020 01:13 am Title: Prelude
I’m really looking forward to this sequel! I love season 2 and 4, so it’ll be exciting to see them almost come together :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're looking forward to it!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 10:01 pm Title: Prelude
Oh, all this banter was very cute! Nice to see the sequel is in play.
“Do I need to bring my mother along?” This gave me a good chuckle. What a strange first date that would be, with both mothers in tow...
Author's Response:
Don't tempt me Jenna, I still have yet to draft that...!
I'm glad you liked the banter, that's always a tough one to get the feel for.
Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 07:21 pm Title: Prelude
The sequel! Yeay
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you're excited for it!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 06:12 pm Title: Prelude
Aww! I liked this a lot. Nice to see a sequel, and I do think it was a good idea to make it a sequel and not just a continuation.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 05:54 pm Title: Prelude
That "how dare you " scene is one of my very favorite JAM moments! Glad to see it used here!
I've always pictured Pam's mom as the first Helene, not the second, as I felt like her personality matched Pam's better. Which one are you going with here?
I like the idea of seeing how Pam's mom interacts with Jim early on in their relationship, so I'm excited to see how that all works out a
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
Yeah, a favourite moment for myself as well, I just couldn't resist throwing it in there.
This is definitely younger and hip Helene, not dating Michael Helene ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 04:59 pm Title: Prelude
JAM 6.0 is already a favorite! Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thank you! I look forward to writing it!
1 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 04:38 pm Title: Prelude
Great to see you starting this out. Lovely on point JAM banter in the car there. The kiss on the cheek and the "how dare you," were super cute. Really looking forward to seeing your version of S2 but with Jim and Pam together. Should be loads of fun.
Author's Response: Thank you! That scene was always one of my favourites, the giddiness is contagious. I'm hoping it'll be a lot more fun, no more going home to a fiance after a date kind of thing...Â