1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2020 03:37 am Title: Performance Reviews
I quite like season 2, but it feels so much better with your improvement!
And... I'm really, really glad that they take things slow. I find it especially endearing.
Thank you for your writing!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reading! I'm glad you like how things are playing out.
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Performance Reviews
Awww yay. Very cute. I like the choice to have them still get physical at the dojo.
Author's Response: Can't have a secret office romance with no chance of discovery right? I'm glad you liked that detail. Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2020 02:47 am Title: Performance Reviews
It really puts a different spin on things having them an established couple (albeit secretly). Of course the awkward moment at the dojo still happened, but there was a completely different motivation for Pam’s reaction. Oh, and their rooftop grilled cheese date is actually a date. So very sweet.
I’m glad in this world Jim still bought the ring after a week! I’m kind of hoping the big plan you’re racing towards is a proposal!
Pam’s prank on Dwight is very fun. I love that it only increases Jim’s awe of her. They’re such a good match.
Author's Response: I can neither confirm nor deny my future big plans, but note that this story is not tagged with angst. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, I had a lot of fun spinning The Client and The Fight's moments into a secret romance. Thanks for reviewing, I always love hearing back from you. You are always so encouraging.
Date: June 09, 2020 11:03 am Title: Performance Reviews
Again short and sweet. Nice to get some introspection on their parts. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with for the Christmas Party. I also liked that you've still maintained that Jim bought the ring a week after they started dating. Nice bit to throw in there.
Author's Response:
Oh wow, that was quick on the draw friend! I'll have you know I almost got derailed from writing this chapter because your update came through, how dare you. I'm glad you liked those little details I sprinkle in, I'm trying to salt as much canon in as I can, because it's fun.
Thanks for dropping by to review!