I'm glad they had a sufficiently awkward Schrute Farms experience, but also that their wedding is still there. Also, I'm glad Jim knows he's more a cheerleader than a critic for her art, but also can see its changes (no prettiest of all the art...)

Author's Response:

Yes, two city-slickers out on the farm, that's always a fun time. I really liked Dwight and Angela's wedding on the farm, so I've stolen it. Jim is indeed aware of his shortcomings and he will not utter those hated words, I promise you!

Thanks for dropping reviews all the way while catching up! It's really nice to see.  

Nice way to keep things moving along for sure. The tour of Dwight's farm was fun. Glad they found a good location there at the end. The rest, yes was a little choppy, but it serves the purpose of getting us ahead in the plot line.

Author's Response:

Dwight's farm was really fun to envision, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! Like I said in the note, I knew it was choppy, but we've got things to do and places to be! We gotta keep our roll on! 

Thanks for always consistently reviewing, I love hearing back from you! 

From the chapter title alone I’m already excited for this one...
“Jim was convinced that Dwight had given them bad directions on purpose as revenge for the years of office pranks” Honestly that wouldn’t be Dwight’s worst idea.

Bless Pam & Jim and their very city-folk reaction to the smells of a working farm.
Hahaha, the graveyard. I can literally hear Pam saying that.
I love all the terrible locations they visit before they get to the one that works.

It’s very sweet that they’ve crossed that line to consummate the marriage (well, proposal, close enough). That’s some pretty impressive self control on both sides that they’ve got to this point without getting that far.

“It was a good thing that he didn’t intend to ever do it again” I feel that. Although it was also my husband’s excuse for every time he went all groomzilla (it’s totally a thing, trust me...) on me and wanted to spend an obscene amount of money on something ridiculous...

I think this chapter worked! It’s hard to move a story forward over a period of time without some chunks of exposition. It was a nice balance here, especially with the more detail during the Schrute farm scenes.

Author's Response:

I was thinking of Dwight and Angela's wedding planning woes when writing this chapter, I couldn't help thinking Dwight might have a little fun with Jim and Pam in his own way.

 The city slickers on the farm bit was by far my favourite part of the chapter to write, I'm glad you liked it. And the cemetary if we recall from The Initiation has... other connotations.

Was the ridiculous thing Sumo suits? Because my brother had sumo suits at his wedding and it actually we surprisingly well.

I'm happy to hear the chapter flowed well enough for you, thanks for dropping by to review!