1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2020 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interested to see where this goes. I think that's a fair change; I do worry for her though!
Author's Response: Hi Confect! Thanks for reviewing!
These are dark time for Pam but I'm a sucker for happy endings. That's all I'll say.
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2020 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good internal thoughts for Pam here. I like seeing what her thoughts are leading up to leaving the lid and the note. Though correct me if I'm wrong, she hasn't actually left the note in Jim's folder yet. Something to look forward to since this is not marked as complete as of yet.
Welcome back. It's great to see you again.
Author's Response: Thanks very much W4! It's great to see you too.
Nope, she hasn't left the not, nor the lid, but she has to make a move, right?
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2020 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back! It’s lovely to see something new from you! Diving straight into the angst here. I can really see it playing out this way. This feels very at the end of her rope Pam. The real punch to the gut was the Dwight mention. Ugh. I love a good nod to their friendship. I hope there’s more to come!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review!
I am a big fan of Pam and Dwight's friendship and in the correspondent episode they really connect.
There is more to come. 4 or 5 chapters in total, almost completely written :)
I hope you enjoy them.
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2020 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, God, it's beautiful and heartwrenching. I like that honest Pam so much, and yet, I dread what changes would be caused by that decision of her. Can't wait to find out!
It's awesome that you're back!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really missed writing just for fun!