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Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2020 08:38 am Title: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

This is fun so far! You know, Dwight can be a jerk and an idiot, but stealing Jim's biggest client is pretty high up there on the list of truly malicious things he's done. I'm so curious to see how this change in timing with the Asian Jim prank leads to movement with JAM!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're with me on that being a really pointlessly malicious move. I hope you enjoy where I go with this!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2020 03:25 am Title: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

Oh, this is such a fun set up! I can’t say I’ve ever read anything like it before, I love a good twist.
You had me a little worried in the first part with Katy making the briefest of cameos, but then the focus shifted to Steve and now I’m so very excited to see where you go with this - especially so early on in canon. A really unique premise...

Author's Response: Thank you! Katy will reappear, if only because this is an S1 fic and so we will touch on Hot Girl, but this is not a Katy-centric fic I assure you. I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2020 06:14 pm Title: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

Huh, not the direction I thought that was going. Revenge on Michael is an unexpected twist, but I'll take it! It sucks to see Jim in a dark place with all of that desperation and the hopeless situation he finds himself in, but I'm sure you will lead us to the light!

Author's Response: I promise this is in no way a dark fic! This is just how I figured Jim might end up coming up with that prank several seasons early...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2020 05:46 pm Title: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

Oh Jim, what's going through your mind? Well actually that's pretty easy to suss out. I'm in love with Pam, Dwight is an ass for stealing my sale, beer is good.

A short chapter but still fun. Nice way to bring in Mark and Steve. Should be a lot of fun.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think this is a logical place for him to go (not Poor Richard's, just mentally) after the excitement of Pam's presence wears off. It was a pretty ugh day otherwise...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2020 01:37 pm Title: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

Okay, that AWESOME and my curiosity just reached the new level. I have no idea about the direction of your story, but I'm here to find out.
Also... poor Jim. I'm so sorry that this day wasn't 'not a bad day' for him :(

Author's Response: Thank you! I think it's possible, and even likely, that Jim would manage to hold both feelings at once. Yes, Pam's presence made it not a bad day, but at the same time he still lost a lot of money and work. I've tried to explain that a bit in the chapter I just put up. I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reading!

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