1 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2020 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Which Pam Forwards a Call
Such a lovely chapter! I really liked the pace of this one.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Sorry for getting to these reviews so late...
1 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2020 11:14 am Title: Chapter 16: In Which Pam Forwards a Call
ARGHHHHHH this is adorbale- I can totally picture this entire scene and the conversation play out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think there's a higher compliment than that you can actually visualize this happening.
Date: September 07, 2020 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Which Pam Forwards a Call
Ahhhhh, there we go. That feels better. Though the lead up to the moment was rough at times, it's always fun to get here. Pam was kind of adorable in her beating around the bush about Katy. Seriously, Pam just ask the guy the direct question. You'll avoid a lot of heartache. Jim being confused to everything untill he spells it out that Katy is with Steve.
Though I am of course getting ahead of myself a bit. Kinda skipped over the first part of this delightful chapter. Jim carpooling with Pam everywhere, just kind of causually sliding right into her life like that, well done Jim. Not pushy or overly aggresive. Just being a good friend and (once a certian misinterpritation is cleared up) leading right into something more than that.
Lots of great visuals with everything here. Loved it.
Author's Response: So glad you liked both halves! I've really enjoyed writing this, so it's delightful to know it's fun for you too. Thanks!
1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2020 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Which Pam Forwards a Call
Yay! I’m a huge fan of quotes from the show being used in slightly different ways and scenarios. I also love seeing their love story unfold slowly, without either of them having to go through a big painful Stamford situation, you know? It’s good for my heart. Haha well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Doing that repurposing is one of my favorite parts of fanfic, so I'm so glad it worked for you!
Date: September 07, 2020 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Which Pam Forwards a Call
Yay!
I really, truly, want to point at every little detail I enjoy here (like Pam's thought about driving stick or that Jim was her big bald wish), but all I can do right now are grinning and exclaiming 'yay' with different voice modulations.
"Then it's a date."
Yay once more!
And thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't ask for a better reaction!