1 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2021 11:16 am Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
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1 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2020 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
Finding that you've written another masterpiece of a story is always such a treat--and this one is no exception. I just am in love with the premise and how you made everything flow so naturally. Thank you for the story--such a wonderful binge-read.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I always wonder what these read like when you aren't (as I am) discovering them day by day, but bingeing them--so it's really good to know they still work!
Date: September 13, 2020 02:35 am Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
This is a wonderful repurposing of it’s a date. I love the moment of clarification & Pam’s face dropping only to fix it so very quickly - thank goodness!
The imagery of Jim six inches off the ground is so very lovely. It made me smile.
“And here I thought I was being incredibly obvious about my crush on my hot new coworker.” Oh, this exchange is just delightful.
Pam continuing the bit with Steve is just perfect.
Nice way to tie it all together at the end too!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, especially for noticing the circular bits of the fic (I love bringing things back around).
Date: September 10, 2020 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
The bit with them being able to order for each other at Cugino's is wonderful. This was another great one from you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! One of the dynamics I love with Jim and Pam is their understanding of each other's food preferences.
Date: September 08, 2020 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
God, this is amazing! I was sad to see that your story is marked as completed, but it couldn't have a better ending!
My favorite part is probably, dinner in Cugino's with Jim admitting his feeling and Pam checking her memories. I'm a sucker for sweetness with a tiny hint of bitterness. And this episode was the one I didn't know I needed. So thank you!
Oh, I love how quickly they signed their papers (poor, poor Toby!). I have no worries that there will be hitches and troubles. They have 'happily ever after' ahead, and that's awesome!
Thank you so much for this journey, I enjoyed it so much! And I selfishly hope that you already have another great idea in mind to turn it into another fantastic story ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and yeah, there's always a bittersweetness to finishing a story. Don't know when I'll have the next inspiration, but thanks for the encouragement :)
Date: September 08, 2020 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
Awww! Loved the ending! I lkked how they just slip into a relationship in which they already were without really noticing. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think that if they didn't have the CN/Merger trauma they'd just slip into it a bit easier...
Date: September 08, 2020 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 17: In Which Pam Actually Meets Steve (Fin)
Well done as ever. I wish I hadn't run out of jellybeans earlier since this clearly deserves a good jellybean-ing. The first (of many) fun moment was the suave do you want to go out to a dinner moment only to be revealed as a psuedo German compound word of adorablness. Lovely image there.
Then of course there's the fun moments of getting dinner and Pam finding the easter eggs in her mental memory.
Pam greeting "Jim" again was a ton of fun as well. Without all the hang-ups she just fits really easily into Jim's group. Probably in a new and exciting way she hasn't felt in years.
Loved the subtle line there about the end of the night and after night activities.
All in all yet another great trip down AU from you. Just great fun all around.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Thanks, friend! I'm really glad you've been along for this ride, and I'm glad you enjoyed the little tidbits in this particular chapter :-D