1 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2021 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
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1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2021 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
Gold Digger and Balloon Man. I need to know what these are. But like, not in too much detail.
But seriously, WW, this was fantastic. What a creative idea. I think my favorites are a tie between losing her cool and losing her pants. "It's a good thing we have daddy" Yeah it is, Phil.
1 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2020 09:43 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
Took me a while to get to this review, but I wouldn't miss it.
This "bookend" of yours blows that first chapter out of the water. Fun domestic times, Pam swooning at Daddy Jim, the fact they remembered to lock the door, Jim's positoin names, what's not to love.
I can just hear the under the breath laughter coming from Jim when he hears Phil call out Pam for losing her pants.
However those last few lines. Yeah go ahead and melt me into a puddle with their sweetness. I don't mind at all. Lovely way to wrap this one up.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I always appreciate your kind reviews. :)
1 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2020 06:21 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
This was sweet and sexy (and alarmingly realistic in terms of snatching those small moments together between child-related activities) - spot on.
Author's Response: Haha thank you!! Gotta seize the moment however you can when you have kids. 😂
1 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2020 12:50 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
From title alone I am already so invested in this chapter!
Oh, that sweet spot is so very real.
“He flashed her a classic Jim Halpert smile and that’s all it took.” Understandable. Totally understandable.
““Just give him the whole box of Fruit Loops and come back here!” This is such a nice blend of humor mixed in with all the sweetness.
Author's Response: Thank you, Jenna! :)
1 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2020 10:17 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
So adorable! Love it! Love your writing! Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
1 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2020 10:13 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
Dying. This was such a perfect end! I laughed out loud at balloon man and gold digger and that entire interaction. I thought it was so perfectly in character. And it was a perfect bookended, what with the way they love each other so much and it’s just such a contrast to Pam and Roy. I loved this. And hey, if you ever want to write a more detailed explanation of the gold digger, you have an audience! 😉
Author's Response: Hahaha I’m so glad you enjoyed it!! I was *this* close to giving you some smut and then kind of chickened out. I’m leaving that up to the masters (yes, I’m looking directly at you.) You can let your imagination run wild. Or just write it for me. 😂
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, BT!
1 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2020 09:45 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
Okay, this is amazing, and yes, closes the circle very well with the first chapter - such a contrast in how attentive he is and how he makes her feel, how much love and fun there is in that relationship.
Plus, the lengths they have to go to to get in some personal time while raising a small child - hilarious and too real.
Nice job! What's next on the docket for you? Because you are not being given the option to not post again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews!! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
I have exactly zero ideas for the next story, so who knows. But if inspiration strikes, you’ll see me again. Haha
1 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2020 09:05 am Title: Chapter 5: Her Pants
There's an episode of Office Ladies (I think it's the Michael's birthday one) where Jenna F talks about turning into a swoony teenage girl when she sees her husband interact with her kids in a certain way. Anyway, I could TOTALLY imagine Pam doing that here. Great job with this story. It was so cute and so fun to read!
Author's Response: That’s true, I forgot about that episode! Dads are hot, what can I say? 😂 Thank you so much!!