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Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2021 04:31 am Title: Chapter 29

Haha, this was some truly excellent Dwight and Jim/Pam interaction. I love Dwight’s outrage, Jim and Pam secretly cracking each other up and just going along with each other’s bullshit - and then the NUTBAG at the end, which is just genius. Also, this line:

“Despite that, it was clearly a march, and Pam would have bet it was to Deutschland Uber Alles as well.”

I actually lol’d. Amazing.

Author's Response: Hah. I'm glad you liked it. I always worry I've made Dwight too broad a humor, but then I realize that the show always does me one more (like the Mussolini speech) and I am relieved again.

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2021 12:21 am Title: Chapter 29

I can't help it, I feel bad for Dwight here. And for the purse girl.
And I'm quite happy to watch Jim and Pam so cozy together :)
Also, a tea-taste-tester should be a real job. I'd apply for this one!
Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Dwight will be made fun of here a lot, but he shouldn't be TOO sad. He'll still get his fun in on his own terms too ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2021 11:22 am Title: Chapter 29

You've captured the Jim/Pam v. Dwight dynamic well, and HILARIOUSLY. Dwight being mad at a rule created to target him being violated and Jim and Pam immediately figuring out ways around it, the N.U.T.B.A.G.... very lol-able.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoy bouncing those three off each other, so I'm glad it's coming along well for you as well!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2021 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 29

This was so much fun to read. Jim and Pam being so in sync as to effortlessly coordinate their bullshiting is just par excellance. Not only that but their interpersonal banter is on point as ever what with Pam and the say that five times fast line.

"Get me my N.U.T.B.A.G!" Seriously! Where do you come up with this stuff? It's just so good! Along with the marching to Deutschland Uber Alles. All of it solid gold. Wonderful job as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed how silly I made Dwight here (as a foil for them of course).

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