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Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2021 07:56 pm Title: Story

I'm late but, I LOVED this concept and chapter! I loved hearing the backstory of Delilah (and as a fan of the Plain White T's song with a similar name, I loved her name), and that she was a shipper as much as we are.

I'm happy she's the one who ultimately fired Brian. She stated what we all thought: "If he intervened for Pam, why not Kevin or Andy?" Smart woman, she is.

"She sits back into her chair, crosses her arms, and prepares to break the fucking rules." MAN what a line to end with. Great chapter as always!

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2021 08:06 pm Title: Story

Another beautiful chapter. I love how Delilah saw the love story from the beginning this look at things through her. Good for her protecting them from Brian best she could.

This twist on the DVD - I remember her saying she'd love to see it. Worked out well for Jim too.

Looking forward to seeing how this incredibly well written piece of arts wraps up.

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the ending! 💗

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2021 08:06 pm Title: Story

Another beautiful chapter. I love how Delilah saw the love story from the beginning this look at things through her. Good for her protecting them from Brian best she could.

This twist on the DVD - I remember her saying she'd love to see it. Worked out well for Jim too.

Looking forward to seeing how this incredibly well written piece of arts wraps up.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 06:12 pm Title: Story

Okay, I have mentioned that I'm very interested in the crew's side of the story, and I liked this a *lot.* Partially just because it's fun to see their perspective, but I also thought you did a lot with the kind of investment they have in Jim and Pam as a story and how you've explored the fan perspective through them. I can't imagine the frustration of someone watching Season 3 with the power to change things. (I was also struck by the somewhat cynical use of Jim and Pam in the pitch - I think I take a much more negative view of the role of the crew than you're giving them here.)

Delilah wanting to put a button on things after Niagara feels significant - both in capturing the perspective of the fan who is watching The Office ONLY FOR JAM, and also in maybe offering some explanation of the relative lack of Jam story between Niagara and Season 9?

This is a strikingly negative view of Brian - which given that Delilah is a shipper on board feels right, although not necessarily objective. And I *love* that we get the answer to some of the questions fans always ask about their failure to interfere earlier, and how it ends up getting repeatedly blown up in Season 9.

I had not made the connection between the fact that they ask for similar things from the crew at very different moments in Season 9. That was artfully done!

(Also, with the editors? I get it. In addition to being entertaining, his randomness must be incredibly useful to them when they need to break up a scene.)

(Also also, may I give the strongest possible recommendation for GodInThisChilis' "Nobody's Business But Mine" if you're interested in a slightly darker take on the view from backstage.)

Reviewer: 3vasectomies Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 03:35 pm Title: Story

I've been keeping up with this story and have enjoyed it a bunch, the S9 material especially (since I've been touching up a Season 9 AU I wrote months ago while writing my current work) and I just wanted to talk about Delilah.

As an audience/reader surrogate and a member of the crew, Delilah's point of view is simply fascinating and fantastically executed. The conversation with Brian, her trepidations on continuing the show after "Niagra", the way she's dedicated to having this story conclude with a grand sense of finality, all of it speaks to every fan of the couple and many fans of the show.

I write this review since I wrote a similar character in the aforementioned AU story and though I was wondering whether or not to keep him as part of the story, you inspired me to have him stick around. I don't like Season 9 for a myriad of reasons, hence my want to rewrite it, but Delilah offers a perspective for those who appreciate what the show itself offered.

Many thanks, and well done!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your comment, I never used to like S9 either but it's grown on me over time. And explaining my way out of the things about canon I generally don't care for is my favorite thing to do in fic. I'm glad this inspired you to continue, I'd love a link to the story if you want to share it!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 11:35 am Title: Story

I absolutely loved getting a look into one of the crew members here. How Delilah felt throughout this whole journey, how she connected with Jim and Pam from afar, it was all amazing. This was a fantastic chapter.

Author's Response: Delilah is all of us. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 10:17 am Title: Story

So here I was thinking this chapter would be Jim's movie. Low and behold I'm surprised. To have it from Delilah'S POV was a stroke of genius. Especially when we get to her memory section. I love the fact she sees herself as the caretaker of their releationship. Though until now unable to do anything about it other than record the ups and downs. Well except for kind of warning off Brian. That by the way was a non-unexpeted take, but a bit more intense. Especially when she asked him why he didn't step in against Roy those two times.

I loved how you had it that the movie is basically made already. I always wondered how fast they worked to hear Jim's request, find footage, and edit it with the song before the workday was done. So that's an elegant solution. Also really liked it that here on the supposed last day of shooting Delilah says "f-it. If there's ever a time to break the rules, it's now."

Now I'm REALLY looking forward to when Pam gets the movie. Great way to ramp up the tension in the best possible way.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 10:11 am Title: Story

I absolutely loved getting a look into one of the crew members here. How Delilah felt throughout this whole journey, how she connected with Jim and Pam from afar, it was all amazing. This was a fantastic chapter.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 09:11 am Title: Story

Those season 9 interviews always hit me so deep, and they're not even that long (that's what she said). So for you to add this entire backstory with both of them wanting a DVD of their moments together, and then how they both opened up to Delilah like this just WRECKED me. I will get nothing done today because I'll be recovering from this update. Before I wallow, I have to commend you on this line:

"Brian may believe he’d been protecting Pam, but Delilah has always had only one goal: protecting their story."

Brilliant.

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2021 09:03 am Title: Story

I LOVE any time we get a perspective from the other side of the camera and this is no exception. And I love all the extra dialogue you give to these scenes we all know as well. It's really perfect! I loved this chapter so much.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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