1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 03:12 pm Title: Self Reflection And A Ceremony
I love the glimpse into their backstories here - Jim as someone from a poorer background pretending to be more experienced/cultured than he actually is is a great touch, so intrigued to see where you take this! And I like the little hint into some potential future conflict for Pam with the Empire. But her making a beeline for Jim, and his joy at seeing her, is incredibly sweet, I'm really enjoying the way you've written their instant connection. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind words basscop!
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 02:58 pm Title: Self Reflection And A Ceremony
Ooooh backstory! Interesting seeing the different paths that have led them here - an escape from a world with no future for Jim, a patriotic duty for Pam. And this gives some fun color to the first scene, knowing Jim is basically faking his way through it all.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2021 06:57 pm Title: Self Reflection And A Ceremony
Jim's from Jedha? That should be VERY interesting as we move forward. Nice to get some backstory for him too. He's just out to escape. Kinda feels like how a certian farmboy from Tatoonie would feel in a few years. Get away from the backwater.
Pam's feeling of uneasiness when the Commander said to let go of family and plantary bonds seems like a sign of things to come. One of Pam's biggest traits is her loyalty, especially to her family. Someone telling her to abandon that would strike a nerve I'm sure.
Roy's here too? More ways things can get interesting that's for sure.
However it's when Pam and Jim get together again that things turn cute. Which of course I love. Really like how you're setting things up. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the wonderful feedback warrior. Yeah when I was thinking of certain traits of Jim and Pam to bring over to this universe, her loyalty really stuck out, glad you liked that. Thanks for reviewing!