Date: July 19, 2021 09:32 pm Title: Betrayal
I can just about sense the indoctrination going on with the heavy course load. Get the cadets so tired it's hard to think about anything else. Meanwhile lots of opportunities to add in Imperial propaganda to a mind just trying to soak everything up.
Kinda sad to read that about her roommate, but then again it's the Empire. Not really known for upstanding morals and all that.
A Lambda shuttle setting down with Stormtroopers filing out? Makes for a nice cliffhanger to end this chapter on that's for sure.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the course load definitely wears them down and brings their defenses down to allow propaganda somewhat brainwash their mind. That cliffhanger will be answered soon!
1 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2021 11:50 am Title: Betrayal
A lot of good groundwork being laid for future adventures here - Pam's test, conflicts between Pam and the school, conflicts between Pam and Tydie, the man in grey... looking forward to what's next.
Sorry for your loss, friend.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Thanks for your condolences, I appreciate it.
1 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2021 11:23 am Title: Betrayal
That roommate is awful!
Will we get to hear from Vader? Can’t wait to read more
Author's Response: We might, but I don’t know. I am currently contemplating whether I include big name characters like that. I want this story to still be canon compliant, so I probably won’t have big names come in like Vader, but I don’t know for sure yet.