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Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2023 08:09 am Title: Koi No Yokan

Koi no yokan indeed.

Love seeing the thought processes here. Can’t wait ti to read more!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2022 09:23 am Title: Koi No Yokan

Hey, you're back!

This is a very good first impression of Dwight, both creative and canonical. And you can practically hear the trumpets playing in Jim's head as he realizes she's pranky.

I've always loved the phrase koi no yokan, and the comparison to mental condition feels... accurate to the feeling.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And thank *you* for coming back!

  I'd never heard of it before it popped up on my Pinterest feed. You're way ahead of me.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And thank *you* for coming back!

  I'd never heard of it before it popped up on my Pinterest feed. You're way ahead of me.  :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2022 09:01 pm Title: Koi No Yokan

Awww, look at Jim already falling for Pam. Loved it. Also loved that Pam is pranking Dwight prior to Jim showing up. Makes sense when you think about it for sure. She would know that Dwight is intense based on her warning and so yeah why not try to take Dwight down a couple pegs.

Also I really liked it that Ed Truck is still in charge here. Not something we see very often so that's fun.

Author's Response:

I actually had to work backward on the math and realize some of the dynamics would be different. Imagine having a "normal" boss in the office.

  *Becomes confused*

 

Anyway, thank you! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2022 02:26 pm Title: Koi No Yokan

Looking forward to seeing where this one goes!

Author's Response:

 Hopefully to a lot of interesting places. 

Thank you for your time!  :D

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