Date: January 02, 2023 10:54 am Title: Metanoia
Feels a little disjoined because his thoughts are revolving around Pam. Because she's there, he can't quite think straight. Then in comes Roy and his thoughts become disjointed for an entirely different reason. Jim thinking Roy was a nice guy, but still and ape, shows his optimism, at least at this early stage. I'm sure that opinion will change as time goes by though.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you understand the purposeful disjointedness.
Burgeoning love can sometimes cause situational ADHD. ;)
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1 [Report This]Date: January 02, 2023 08:16 am Title: Metanoia
I don’t think he’ll succeed in changing his mind.
Roy, though. Wonder how he’ll react when he finds out that ape is actually her fiance.
Author's Response:
Poor ape, he means well.
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1 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2022 10:24 am Title: Metanoia
"Jim, are you ready to go on an unforgettable journey of self-discovery?" I would really love to see the Jim-Dwight version of The Initiation. Feels like he would've had more fun with it than Ryan did.
"Never met a girl who gave me ulcers before." That's how you know it's real, Jim.
"He's an ape. A nice ape, but an ape." That's Roy all right.
Ah, and just like that, years of patterns are formed!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command. Jim-Dwight Initiation, it is. I just hope I can make it Dwight-y enough, ha!
And poor Roy. He is who he is. Not a bad guy, just . . . Roy.
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1 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2022 05:37 am Title: Metanoia
Really really liked this! You can feel Jim’s torment coming through when he finds out about Roy. And omg, calling Roy an Ape? GENIUS
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much!