Date: April 06, 2007 05:50 pm Title: Thanksgiving
Aww, poor Toby. I feel like this is a really realistic portrayal of his typical Thanksgiving.
Date: March 27, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Thanksgiving
The little mittened hand...how poignant is that? Toby is a freaking prince. This one is so simple, but so succinctly sad and sweet. Perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Thanksgiving
Now this one is way too sad. I hate Toby's ex-wife. :-(
Author's Response: Yeah, man, she sucks! But maybe Toby leaves his wet towels laying on the bathroom floor and cuts his toenails in bed and never takes the garbage out so who are we to judge?! ;-)
Date: November 22, 2006 01:48 pm Title: Thanksgiving
OMG. Poor Toby. *sniff*
Author's Response: Poor Toby, indeed. Let's get that man a girl ASAP! I was in a melancholy mood, what can I say...
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 09:56 am Title: Thanksgiving
I love how you succinctly capture the loneliness in Toby's life. The pot pie? Uh, pretty much kills me. Damn these people and their supposedly being in a comedy and yet they completely break my heart! Great job Par5, keep 'em comin! :)
Author's Response: But pennylane, it's a turkey pot pie so it's okay! Hee. I know what you mean - some of the writers clearly did not get the memo when they were hired that this is indeed a comedy! Ah, Toby. So sad.
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 09:20 am Title: Thanksgiving
Love Toby. Love him here. His loneliness really comes through - the empty seat, the pot pie.
It would be the sweetest thing if he had someone...hey, I hear Karen might be available soon (wishful thinking?) Well done, as usual. And I admire how economical with words you are...not my forte, that's for sure!
Author's Response:
I know you love Toby - knew you'd be a sucker for lonely Toby! As am I. We do need to get him a date and an exotic looker like Karen might be just the ticket! I like being limited to 100 words - it's like you've said before about knowing when a fic is just DONE. A deadline or a word limit -either way works! My feeling is that you always use just the exact right amount of words.
Date: November 22, 2006 08:55 am Title: Thanksgiving
omg, that is heart-wrenching!
Author's Response: I can't help it lisahoo! Toby, man, he just breaks my heart!
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 08:50 am Title: Thanksgiving
Wow... these little drabbles are great! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks agd300! But I have to take a break to read your latest chapter now!