Date: April 06, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Aftermath
These are all really good, but the last one almost physically *hurts* b/c this is the /exact/ scenario I imagine for JAM at the end of s3. I can see it unfolding just like that. Great fic, overall.
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 09:20 pm Title: Aftermath
The last 2 broke my heart. "Pam’s the one walking away from him this time but it isn’t any easier." Very well written and so very, very sad.
Date: March 27, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Aftermath
Par 5 this is unbelievable. The ones for Creed and Toby added such depth to their characters and made me a little teary. The ending was sort of like Roy's fist would feel I suspect, but sadly very realistic to where we are now in the show. Great work. Drabbles seem very hard and you're a master.
Author's Response: Thanks so much uncgirl! I really liked what you said about the ending being like Roy's fist! I don't think this is how it will play out but was just having a momentary lapse into melancholy to get past all these darn reruns...
10 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Aftermath
Wow. These are all so sad! And Toby with his turkey and Creed...lovely.
I do not like the ending, of course. It's so well-written that it feels real, and that makes me want to weep. *sniff*
Beautiful, as usual!
Author's Response: Sorry, lis! I felt like writing something gut-wrenchingly sad but I limited myself to a drabble so it wouldn't hurt TOO much! I'll make it up to you with fluff when we reach the happy ending waiting for us on the show. Right?!! Please? ;)
Date: March 27, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Aftermath
Oh Jim...yes you CAN. This is just too too sad. He's still lying to Karen, of course, a prisoner of his own iron-clad defense system. The last line is killer...go and break my heart why don't you? Very well done, Ms. Par. Very good indeed.
10 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 11:18 am Title: Aftermath
oh you are SOOO cruel. Cruel, cruel, cruel. Why must you continue Jim's lies?
Author's Response: Mostly just to torture you, Moxie! Sorry, but this hianous has just gone on way too long!