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Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2006 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I am soooo loving the premise of this. This is a great start. But hey, what about Karen's reaction?

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god, FNB, this is terrific!  First of all, I really like the whole watching-the-documentary approach, only it's particularly unique here because it's not so far in the distant future.  I can totally imagine Michael hosting viewing parties, and OMG - I was nervous for her about all that the camera caught being revealed!

Terrific work here - off to the next chapter...

Reviewer: sharky Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yikes! Awkward! And you captured it so well. :)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2006 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this just broke my heart.  So sad.  You did a great job expressing Pam's panic and confusion over the cameras capturing everything that happened on Casino Night.

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