Date: December 19, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Roy
make them safe somehow
This is why I love Roy. He is simple and knows he wants it simple. and safe.
Date: December 19, 2006 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 7: Karen
there didn't seem to be a damned thing she could do about it
I don't know if this is the Karen I picture. I will go with it, because I trust your writing!
9 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 6: Jim
ooohh. give me more Jim & Karen tension!
Date: December 19, 2006 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pam
was that Roy had taken care of more than a few little details
I love this little revelations that Pam seems to keep having. It is so true, no matter how much someone makes you cr azy, it's hard to have perspective inside the relationship. Great work, as expected.
Date: December 19, 2006 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ugh....this is killling me! ::sigh::
Date: December 19, 2006 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
Goodness. Pam should feel guilty about how she handled that thing with Jim.
And Michael...oh, Michael! He's a lot of things, but just like a child, he's very insightful because he sees in black and white. Shades of gray are great, but you need those two reference points to keep everything in persepective.
I'm so glad this is moving along so quickly!! I'm sitting at my desk at work, and I need something to pass the time (solitare has actually been removed from this comp).
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: December 19, 2006 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
as if he understood all too well that they were on the cusp of a miracle, teetering on the chasm separating falling from running
Agh! Ripped my heart out! It was a miracle - what a lovely way to put it. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
Oh my God - this chapter had me both racing through it to find out what happens and taking many pauses to fully comprehend what was happening...just, wow. So intense. And awkward. And, oh Michael!
Date: December 19, 2006 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
You've written Pam's thoughts on Jim's confession beautifully.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I left Pam at Jim's New Year's Eve party and I have to go rescue her before midnight.
Date: December 19, 2006 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great line: as Michael dismantled the carefully constructed facade she and Jim had pieced together since his return.
You've done a great job with Roy here, I love how he totally misunderstands Jims feels for Pam, because that's just what Roy would do.
And Phyllis saying "That's too bad for Karen"? Awesome.
Date: December 19, 2006 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
First of all, I have a terrible head cold and read at least two paragraphs before I realized it was "mediation" not "meditation". Hahaha.
Secondly, this chapter is brilliant. It's not over the top at all, you hit just the right notes with all the characters. I was seriously reading between the fingers covering my eyes. I was so horrified for everyone and actually shouted "Michael! Don't!" at my laptop. So, good on ya.
Date: December 19, 2006 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jim
Wow excellent story! I hope you update it soon :)
Date: December 19, 2006 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
What a great chapter. I love that Michael let the secret out of the bag.
Date: December 19, 2006 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Jim
Loved Jim's thoughts in this chapter
Date: December 19, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
I initially misread the title of Ch 9 as "Michael's Medication" HA! And what a train wreck -- totally on the money!! And I am getting the shakes waiting for each new chapter of delicious awkwardness!
Date: December 19, 2006 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Jim
Oh, Michael! That was so good and suspenseful and utterly mortifying, which is the Scranton way after all. I honestly could picture it happening like that. I'm glad Roy and Jim get to have a confrontation even if Roy doesn't get much of an answer. It just needed to happen.
5 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 11:08 am Title: Chapter 10
..."Where Pam was concerned, there often were no answers."
Great line! And great chapter.
Now type, girl7.l Type like the wind!!!!
Date: December 19, 2006 11:04 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
Oh my God, oh my God, that was so painful. And so how I can see something like this playing out on the show. Them trying to stop him, and he just keeps bulldozing away. Okay, have to read next chapter...
Date: December 19, 2006 10:51 am Title: Chapter 10
ACK! Thank God there was another chapter! I didn't realize it when I responded to chapter 9....but still...more please! hehehe. Poor Jim....I loved his response of "that's so far from...." Because seriously "come on" just didn't sound right! It was so above that.
Date: December 19, 2006 10:46 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
OMG!!!! I can't believe you ended it there!!! Ok, can I just tell you, that was PERFECT. I could SO see it all going down that way. And the tension you created...seriously I'm not sure I'm going to be able to handle it when it all comes out in the open on TV, because you had me biting my nails reading this thing! Way to go! MORE, MORE!!!!
Date: December 19, 2006 09:56 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
Is there any way to make the paragraphs not run over the edge of the page? I can't read the side words.
7 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 09:22 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
So I wanted to see what all the hubbub was about but holy...I was NOT prepared for this. That was seriously a train wreck adn I don't know how Jim and Pam would ever forgive Michael for doing that! Hurry up and post the next part- you're killing me here girl7! :)
Date: December 19, 2006 09:07 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
Oh. My. God.
So perfectly painful. I can totally see Michael doing this.
Now please write more and fix it.
Thank you.
Date: December 19, 2006 09:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
Ahhhhhhhh that made me so uncomfortable. In the best way. See, I knew that you could do this scenario justice - and then some. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2006 08:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation
You're right - that's so freakin' crazy it could just happen like that!!!
Lovely work as always, and I know I can expect a nice fuzzy happy warm ending from you! :-) (TWSS!)