Date: December 29, 2006 06:52 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
You're killing me. I'm as anxious as Jim waiting for these little gifts. More...more....MORE! Please?
Date: December 29, 2006 06:38 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
I'm all sad now, with the way you ended this chapter. Now you've got me wondering how Jim will end up at Kevin's party...it's inevitable, right? Right?
10 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2006 06:29 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
scared jim is annoying jim.. but it *is* staying true to character.. so i forgive you. ^_^ NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2006 05:44 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
Okay, the suspense is actually starting to get to me. This was a wonderful chapter, and I'm actually feeling anxious for Jim.
Date: December 29, 2006 05:08 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
You're killing me! I can't wait for Day 12!
Date: December 29, 2006 04:25 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
I'm loving this story...always looking forward to the next chapter. I think there is an element of danger here that might spill over in the show. And that's the idea that Jim can be kind of a dick. We all know that he is really into Pam, and yet he continues to use Karen. He had the chance to break it off with her over lunch but instead he gets himself deeper.
Date: December 29, 2006 03:33 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
No! Jim needs to spend New Year's with Pam and a tube of Ben Gay! This is so clever, Moxie...can't wait to see what gets delivered next.
Date: December 29, 2006 12:21 am Title: On The Second Day of Christmas
Dwight & Jim + Choose Your Own Adventure = Comedy Gold.
Date: December 29, 2006 12:20 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
I love how you wrote Jim's conversation with Mark. I liked how Mark gave him such a hard time, and the dialogue is great. I also really like Jim trying to butter up the delivery woman!
Date: December 29, 2006 12:16 am Title: On The Fourth Day of Christmas
You've done a really great job with each day (so inventive!), and your characterization is great, but I have to admit that I don't really care for the way Jim is handling his situation with Karen. It makes me as annoyed with him as Karen is. I really hope he sorts things out with her soon.
Date: December 28, 2006 10:45 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
LOVE IT! Well done. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: December 28, 2006 05:11 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
Who new Ben Gay could be so...fun. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: December 28, 2006 04:32 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
Loved the Mark and Jim conversation. Can't wait for day 4
Date: December 28, 2006 03:24 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
Fantastic! You've officially hooked me on the story with this chapter, well done ;)
9 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2006 02:16 pm Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
Another great chapter.
I wonder if Karen would have just called, instead of coming over.
Oh god the suspense is killing me. I love it.
Date: December 28, 2006 11:39 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
yes! sweet. i'm loving it. and again, your interpretation of each line is hysterically awesome. turtledoves...wicked clever. and i *love* the french hens. can't wait for more!
Date: December 28, 2006 10:28 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
Oh goody, she's staying! Romantic French film and achey shirtless Jim and a tube of Ben-Gay...sounds like a recipe for a fine afternoon to me. And I can't wait to hear all about it! This story is SO much fun, Moxie...who knew French Hens could be so tantalizing?
Date: December 28, 2006 10:10 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
“I really don't care what people think.”
Jim is starting to grow a pair!! Wooo Hoo!! I see more ben-gay in his future. Keep up with the updates...I'll be waiting not so patiently...janet
Date: December 28, 2006 09:38 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
I am completely hooked. Pleeeease write more soon! I love everything about this story.
Date: December 28, 2006 08:05 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
I LOVE this! I can't wait for more :) :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2006 08:03 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas
Ahhhhh! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! *bounces while waiting for the next chapter* LOL
Date: December 28, 2006 07:14 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
OMG -- the conversation between Mark & Jim was awesome!!! "It will bite you in the ass, mark my words."
And Shirtless!Jim is always good, no matter the reason. And PissedOff!Karen is the icing on the cake. How could she not pick up on the connection between Pam & Jim? There is no other love but you, indeed!
Date: December 28, 2006 06:58 am Title: On The Third Day of Christmas
This is the kind of fic that I wish I'd stumbled upon once it was finished...I'm so impatient to read the rest! At least the chapters are long, which I always love. I'll take a 5,000 word chapter over a drabble any day!
This one was such fun to read...I'm of course very happy that Karen walked in and was send away, obviously upset. I figure that relationship should be out of the way by the next update.
One thing - you might want to change the French to "Il n'y a pas d'autre amour que vous." "Mais" is technically "but", but we use "que" in this case. You could also use "sauf" instead of "but", but it's not quite as powerful.
9 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2006 07:24 pm Title: On The Second Day of Christmas
love it!!! can't wait for more!!!
Date: December 27, 2006 04:24 pm Title: On The Second Day of Christmas
Very interesting day 2. I love that you are following the true 12 days of Christmas too.