10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 09:49 pm Title: The real birthday present
Bravo! Awesome writing!
Date: February 11, 2007 11:47 pm Title: The next morning
Haha! I LOVED that Michael instantly wanted to have a party for the occasion. Awesome. :D
Date: February 11, 2007 09:08 pm Title: The next morning
ooh -- I love the idea of Pam & Jim being open about their relationship, and the opportunity for more embarrassing comments from Michael!
Date: February 11, 2007 06:43 pm Title: The next morning
this is just too adoarble and great. I'm so happy you decided to write another chapter! I can't wait! You really have the Jim & Pam voices written very well.
Date: January 31, 2007 09:55 pm Title: The real birthday present
wow, excellent stuff. i have to admit the only thing i loved more than the JAM hookup was everything leading up to it! i like your take on the story, and kinda wish you had a say in the writing of the show. good work, i look forward to anything else you feel compelled to write
10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2007 08:03 pm Title: The real birthday present
goodness! and people say I write smut.... ;-)
well done!
Date: January 31, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
You're chapters are a great length, don't apologize! And your dialogue is awesome! :-)
Date: January 28, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Monday the 15th
Holy Crap HCT! you were not kidding about the smut. ha! Awesome tho. awesome. glad we chat folks could totally peer pressure you into finishing it off. or, wait, is it done? more more!
oh, and sorry i did not leave a review before but the whole thing with the i-pod? wow. if a man had done that for me i'd be totally bowled over. it's so perfect. very hi-tech teapot. very nice.
Date: January 28, 2007 03:22 pm Title: The real birthday present
Sooo good. : ) Very hot!
Date: January 28, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Monday the 15th
I'm not much of a reviewer, but I don't think the chapters are too long at ALL.
Wow, that birthday present chapter blew my door off. So hot, really really good. I hope you write more.
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 06:47 pm Title: The real birthday present
Wow....good chapter! :)
Date: January 27, 2007 06:31 pm Title: The real birthday present
WOW!!! Bravo - fantastic! Very hot, very real, very I-so-want-this-to-happen! Did I mention hot?
Date: January 25, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Monday the 15th
Sweetest gift ever! And I don't mean that as in 'sweet, dude!' And... I agree with everthing that Will says.
Date: January 23, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Tuesday the 23rd
wow i really like this. i read your comment about the chapters being too long and i couldn't disagree with you more... i love these longer ones! keep up the good work, i enjoyed angry-psycho-bitch karen and angrier roy, and i think you are doing a great job portraying jim and pam. im really looking forward to chap 5, 6, 7..... :)
Date: January 18, 2007 06:52 am Title: Tuesday the 23rd
Wow I wonder if TV Karen will act like this. I like that you wrote her more normal then perfect Karen
Date: January 17, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Monday the 15th
amazing!! i can relate to pam having tears in her eyes at the end of their target date ;-( but wow, such a great story!! i can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: January 17, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Monday the 15th
amazing!! i can relate to pam having tears in her eyes at the end of their target date ;-( but wow, such a great story!! i can't wait for the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Tuesday the 23rd
In the words of Conan O'Brien..."That was friggin Awesome!!"
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
It's only rambling if the story isn't progressing, and this one definitely is. Another great chapter, can't wait for more!
Date: January 15, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
Your chapters are fine. Very interesting as well. Triangles are nice.
Date: January 15, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
I don't think they're too long at all! I loved how much fun they had just doing nothing! Please continue!
Date: January 15, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
i don't think i'd use the word absurd. i think you're doing an awesome job. the chapters definately aren't too long of a read and the story is lovely. of course, i'm insanely partial to Jam. :)
Date: January 15, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th
Rambling is good -- it fits them and the way they are happy just to spend time together. I'm a bit confused as to why Pam would be expecting Jim for dinner. But I like the way they are taking careful steps in their relationship. Very sweet and true to character.
Date: January 15, 2007 11:11 am Title: Office Intermission
That ending was sooo sweet! I won't get my hopes up about what Jim is going to give Pam for her birthday; I'm sure it will be good though. Awesome chapter .7.
Date: January 15, 2007 03:38 am Title: Tuesday the 16th
That was a wonderful third chapter!!! Write more! you're so talented