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Reviewer: Team_Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think you need to write more, because this is good good GOOD!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 3

WOw - I can't believe I haven't read this until today!  Great characterizations - you got their voices dead on.  :-)

Author's Response: That's such a huge compliment considering that I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the end of 'My True Love' and 'Distance Learning'! And I'm always worried about going overboard with characterization, so thank you so much!!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

So when are you going to send in your resume to the producers so they can hire you as a writer? I'll wait patiently.

LOVE this. Wish it would really happen. Like now. 



Author's Response: HA! Wow. Well, you know, I may have to soon if I keep ignoring the med school applications that I'm supposed to be working on to write this. Always nice to know I have a back up plan! ;-) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Sheppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this story.  I believe it's the first one I've seen where the documentary has aired.  Really like Jim standing up to Roy.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was friggin awesome!!! :D Keep it up!!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yey, Jim stood up to Roy!! Poor Roy...and yey for Karen!
Can't wait for the next part.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow Jim stood up to Roy. I love it.

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