Reviews For Dancing Around the Competition
Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 06:16 am Title: The Real Chapter 5
Date: October 21, 2007 06:16 am Title: The Real Chapter 5
i'm so excited for the restt (: i don't want it to endddd.
hahaa !
hurry and write the next part. i'm looking forward to itt (:
Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2007 06:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Date: October 15, 2007 06:11 am Title: Chapter 5
i can't wait until you continue this story ! put the next chapter up soonn, don't leave me in the suspenseeee !!
hahaa [:
Reviewer: bigtuna86 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Date: March 28, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
awwww i love it
Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Date: January 09, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
I was going to tell you that you had a typo...But I see that it was Pam that made the mistake..not you...hahahha
Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Date: January 09, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
I was going to tell you that you had a typo...But I see that it was Pam that made the mistake..no you...hahahha
Reviewer: annonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Hey! point me into the direction of a beta and i will gladly get them to look over it!
Date: January 09, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have some grammar issues in some spots and missing punctuations. Try a beta, it'll help the flow better.
I'm really interested to see what happens. Don't wait too long before the next post!
Author's Response: Hey! point me into the direction of a beta and i will gladly get them to look over it!